Thursday, April 19, 2012

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Blog # 8



Is Music is good tool for Health?



Music is kind of medicine to human body and mind, it helps depressed people to get refresh in their lives. Music therapy is being used in hospitals to prevent many dieses. In the article “Is Music is good tool for health”, by Elizabeth, In her, She wrote how music effects on people medically. She is expressing music therapy is giving benefits to patients who are under great stress, muscle tension and many others problems.



Some say that laughter is a medicine. A good music can really get you out of stressed mood. However slower music makes the state of mind calm and relax. This effects on people in very personal way. Even after you stopped the music, it lasts its effects to body very long. For instance, one of my friend who is an accountant in one of the busiest farm in New York City. He has always stressed from his work. He has always complains about his work. One day I called for my house party where we had good dj’s who were playing such marvelous songs. Where he had joined the party and listen the songs and found himself very joyful. All of his stressed passed away and next morning he started work like a happy employee.



In another experiment, music can really make a worker to get their jobs done in short period of time. I was reading a newspaper, where I read that A typist who types 250 words in three minutes, but if he listen to his favorite music depending his likes or dislikes , this speed could go up to 400 words in three minds. Therefore music is not just good tool for health, it also great motivation of an ordinary employee to do well in his/her related job.



In conclusion, Music is great source of health, it helps reduce stress and makes the state of mind relax and put us in peas, and Music is a tool to prevent many diseases. Music therapy also helping at hospitals in many ways.

  

1 comment:

  1. Muhammad,
    you need a summary of the main points in the intro, which you do not have. But there are also serious grammar and usage problems. For example the next few lines
    "This effects on people in very personal way. Even after you stopped the music, it lasts its effects to body very long." Effects is not a verb (it would be "This affects people"). Also it would be "its effects last" rather than "it lasts its effects."
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